“Blackbird singing in the dead of night
take these broken wings and learn to fly
all your life
you’ve been waiting for this moment to arrive
Blackbird, fly”
-The Beatles
Bluejay singing in the light of day
make sure you dry your tears, fly away
for some time
you’ve known you can go so far in the sky
Bluejay, up high
-Me(:
emilyw
really good!!!
Emily! You poet, you! I love your poems! Keep writing them after inko.us is over!
Please? haha
good work emmers! I did a whole thing on the beatles hehe I think you should sing this (by the way, Im about to comment on everything you’ve made”
i just discovered I can’t comment on old posts
nice job! good inspiration.
I like your version of it. Its very pretty(:
GREAT SONG. i can play this on my guitar <3
Very good poem! It was very interesting and thoughtful.
Emily this is genius! Your poem is most definitely as good as the Beatles song!
I love how you used “Black Birds” as inspiration for your peom (: good job
I love how you took some lyrics and flipped it around to make the complete opposite of a black bird. This is a really pretty sounding poem.
awww my little beatles fan bestie
that was sooo good !! it kinda reminded me of when a mom is trying to get her little kid to stop crying, in an i-love-you-but-stop-making-noise-way.
awwe, this is so cute !!!
OOO!! I love how you changed it from one kind of bird into another kind of bird! I think that’s cool!
This is such a good poem. I could see “Black Birds” influence on your poem “Bluejay.”